Originally posted by cslgirl
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Duncan - my 2 cents / no sense.........
1. might think about a different banner style / colouring - IMHO, the font should be a more attractive size / style / design.
2. Avoid use of slang / words used in speech everyday, but less used in the written word - e.g. hassling
3.“When You Need Help With Factory Plant Removals, Moving Large Machinery, Machine Handling or Equipment Handling…
- Too much use of caps...
4. Looks like the gallery link is not finished
Other than that, looks tidy matey :thumbs:
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