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    #16
    Originally posted by cslgirl View Post
    Looks good to me.

    All I have to say is... who is the hunk sitting on the machine thingy on the homepage?:whistle:
    Well now CSLgirl ... that would......nt be me im afraid :bigcry::banghead:

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      #17
      Duncan - my 2 cents / no sense.........

      1. might think about a different banner style / colouring - IMHO, the font should be a more attractive size / style / design.

      2. Avoid use of slang / words used in speech everyday, but less used in the written word - e.g. hassling

      3.“When You Need Help With Factory Plant Removals, Moving Large Machinery, Machine Handling or Equipment Handling…

      - Too much use of caps...

      4. Looks like the gallery link is not finished

      Other than that, looks tidy matey :thumbs:

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        #18
        Sent you email Duncan.

        Cheers

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          #19
          Duncan, I can only criticize the distinct lack of naked ladies drapped over machinery and plant.:beer: Dirty naked ladies solutions, thank you please.:whistle:

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